Essay one

For my educational essay I am considering writing about my transition between the University of Toledo and Ursuline College. The very two different settings was a huge change for me. Before I even considered transferring I had to evaluate the pros and the cons. This was a very difficult process and had a great impact on my educational future.

Three key points I would like to put in my essay is the difference in cost, location, and class sizes.

Thesis:

Transferring from a greatly populated institute to a small private college had a great impact on my life, influencing money, different location settings, and the large variation in class sizes.

I'm not that good at writing thesis statements so everyones input will be greatly appreciated. I tried to accomplish my topic, plus my focus, and three main points. However, the wording may be a little odd. Comments and feedback are welcomed:)