Essay two

A person’s identity can be recognized by their role in society, a major change in their life, and their interests.

I think that someone's idenity has a lot to do with their job occupation. Whenever you meet someone new, usually the first question asked is what do you do? Even if you are not paid for your occupation, such as a college student, it is still your role in society. Also, everyone goes through changes in their life. When I went from high school to college my identiy definetly changed. As you experience new things you also find new interests. Whether it is deciding your major based on a class you like or a cute guy you met and end up falling in love with, you are shaping the person you will become in the future.

Crooked River Burning

At first Crooked River Burning was difficult to understand. I had lived in the suburbs of Cleveland my entire life and went to school right across the street from Shaker Lakes and have never heard of some of the people and places in the book. The fact that Cleveland used to be one of the largest citys is baffeling, but also fasinating. It's interesting and different to read a love story told from my own city and not New York or Los Angeles. This book ties together history and romance while revealing some of the city's secrets.

Color Me Butterfly Quote

" They were relieved that the Prince of Darkness had, at long last, left their home" (Marlow 74). I picked this quote because it demonstrates an important changing point in the book. Everyone was relieved when Isaac finally left the household. No more abuse and no more fear. I also appreciate how the author capatilized Prince of Darkness in the quote. This emphasizes Isaac's evil. As soon as Isaac drove away, Eloise had to raise the kids on her own. Strain and relief overcomed her the moment she found out Isaac left. However, Isaacs disappearance from their life was an overall positive feeling.

Marlow, L. Y. Color Me Butterfly. Grand Rapids: El, 2007. Print.

Peer Review

Being able to recieve feedback from others is helpful when writing a final paper. During the peer review session it was important that me and my partner read our papers out loud to eachother. This allowed us to fix any akwardness and misuse of words, something I struggle with. This paper taught me how to flow paragraphs together while inturpurting facts, opinions, and own experiances. We could apply each of these aspects to other papers we write in the future.

Eloise's Ways of Knowing

In the begginning of Color Me Butterfly Eloise expresses silance. She keeps the abuse in her family silent and listens to Isaac. Even when the kids are abused she feels as if she can only sit back and pray. Not leaving Isaac first signs of abuse and keeping mute was very difficult for Eloise. After Isaac leaves she begins to feel relief. Being a single parent raising eight children by herself makes her a strong individual. With a defined role in society she begins to express characteristics of a recieved knower. Finding her own identity after Isaac leaves, she still remains true to others. Eloise is a good listener for her children and grandchildren.

I.O.U.S.A

I.O.U.S.A is a movie produced to make the citizens of the United States aware of the enormous debt our country is currently in. The movie illustrates a time line of debt. It showed how we climbed into debt and how we fell out of debt over years. However, by the time the twentyth century came, our country has been in the greatest amount of debt thus far. The message was clear that if nothing is done to relieve our country out of debt, then we will escalade even further in debt then we are today.

I think that this movie has a good meaning. Citizens need to be aware of debt and start organizations to make others aware. The leaders of our country need to form new regulations to help our country out of debt. Also, people need to save now before it is too late.

Essay one

For my educational essay I am considering writing about my transition between the University of Toledo and Ursuline College. The very two different settings was a huge change for me. Before I even considered transferring I had to evaluate the pros and the cons. This was a very difficult process and had a great impact on my educational future.

Three key points I would like to put in my essay is the difference in cost, location, and class sizes.

Thesis:

Transferring from a greatly populated institute to a small private college had a great impact on my life, influencing money, different location settings, and the large variation in class sizes.

I'm not that good at writing thesis statements so everyones input will be greatly appreciated. I tried to accomplish my topic, plus my focus, and three main points. However, the wording may be a little odd. Comments and feedback are welcomed:)